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= = THE DAY I MET HIM

The frist time I saw him was when I was riding my bike home. He was so fast I cound't see him at all. All I saw was blue he nearly hit me off my bike. I heard the fire drill when I got there I saw him. So I went to help him, but something caught my eye. I coundn't tell what it was. It was so small it was flying right for me. I did not know what to do but wait! penis whats this it's a pink thing driving a bus. I better go take a look what is wrong. I got a good look at the blue thing it was not a blue thing it was Sonic and the gang. I coundn't belive my eyes I said I have to met sonic I thourht! I must help him "I know the house" I said to Sonic And I showed him into the house. "whats your name?" asked Sonic. "My name is Matt-attack". "Hi Matt-attack I am sonic nice to meet you" said Sonic. "Time for me to go home now Sonic" said Matt-attack. "Good bye Matt-attack maybe we will met again sometime and thank-you for helping us out to day" said Sonic. "Ok I will keep i'll my eye open for you" said Matt-attack. THE END FOR NOW. Reflection: I did this because wanted to make a story about Sonic the Hedgehog because I like him very much and I like reading the comics about him so that is why I made up a story about Sonic the Hedgehog.

Dear Mr Gunn Imagine your gliding down a big white blinding mountain with the clear blue sky over your head and the cold fresh air brushing against your face. Callum and Matt STOP day dreaming and get back to work, ah imagine that. Finally the ski trip has come around we have been waiting all year for this trip. We think this trip would be a great way to know your class mates better. Another way this would help is that we will be joined by another class so we will relate to another people from different class and a new way to meet new people. A way this would help our learning it will teach us to be responsible to write letter to parents and to book skiing time and where we are going to stay and food. It will teach to work cooperative with each other and a different class, and it will teach us budgeting to try to save as much money as we can. It will be an overnight camp so we will be able to talk and get to know other people and to have fun. So through this letter I have talked about what it can teach us and why it will be fun so I hope you will let Matt and I go on this fun, fantastic ski trip this will be. Yours sincerely Callum Hugill and Matthew Scott Parent comment: After much discussion it was good to see Matt go back over his work and edit it so it made sense when we read the story. The start of the story got me interested as I wanted to know what it was he saw. ** VIDEO GAMES ARE BAD AND GOOD FOR YOU? ** ** Imagine you’re sitting down on the couch playing your favorite game on your Xbox or your play station and in a few days you could be as fat as this guy you wouldn’t want to be as fat as that would you now stop imagine or you mite became fat like him ok. ** ** Video games are bad for you because you mite eat fatty food when you are playing you’re favorite video game on you’re X box Play station. Video games can be bad for you because you don't get out and you mite get fat like same people. The good thing about video games are that they can be good for our hand eye coworerdnacson. If video games were not invited most of the fat people mite be more slim in stand of bing fat and I think that so bad people are because they think that it is ok to do bad staff that the bad video games do to people or other thing on the video games. **
 * Video games are good and bad. What is a video game will it is a thing that you play on a computer or an X box and play station. **
 * Video games are bad for many reasons. **
 * Imagine you’re playing the best game in the world and then all you hear is get off that game how does it help you now get off it or ales you will stay off. **
 * Video games are good for many reasons. **
 * Video games can be good for you because it could help with your hand eye coworerdnacson. Video games are good for you because some of them can be good for you’re education but same can not be because they mite have killing so that’s why video games are bad for. **
 * The good thing about the video game sellers is that they ask for id if you are buying a R18 game so that little kids don’t buy the wrong and Lauren that killing is the right thing to when there older and that smoking is the right thing to do as will. **
 * The games that little kids shouldn’t be playing are like gun games and boy racing games. Because the gun games mite have killing in them and the boy racing games mite have really fast cars and the kids mite think that go fast in the real world. I think that there are good games like sonic. **
 * So that’s why video games are bad for you not good and that’s why I think stores shouldn’t be able to sale little kids bad games and they should always ask for id when someone buys a (R18) game. **
 * Now it is time for me to go and play my X box or should I go and play out side instead of playing my X box. **
 * The Reason why I did my topic on why both bad and good video games are bad for you is because I us to play them my self but now I don’t. **